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Re: Typos

Post by Majestic » Tue Feb 21, 2017 2:34 am

[Grammar] p. 183

Under Bouts of Madness

The word "the" is left out of the following:

"...rolls equal or less than difference between their Shadow point total..."

It should say:

"...rolls equal or less than the difference between their Shadow point total..."

There should also be a comma after "Shadow" in the following:

"If they gain another point of Shadow then the bout is triggered on a roll of 1 – 6, and so on."

so that it reads:

"If they gain another point of Shadow, then the bout is triggered on a roll of 1 – 6, and so on."
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Re: Typos

Post by Otaku-sempai » Tue Feb 21, 2017 3:54 am

Majestic wrote:There should also be a comma after "Shadow" in the following:

"If they gain another point of Shadow then the bout is triggered on a roll of 1 – 6, and so on."

so that it reads:

"If they gain another point of Shadow, then the bout is triggered on a roll of 1 – 6, and so on."
Incorrect. The comma would only be needed if the word 'then' was not in the sentence. Otherwise a comma would be redundant.

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Re: Typos

Post by Majestic » Tue Feb 21, 2017 6:36 pm

[Grammar] p. 184

A word is missing, perhaps "that"?, so:

"...either on the reason required the roll that triggered the crisis..."

would change to:

"...either on the reason that required the roll that triggered the crisis..."
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Re: Typos

Post by Majestic » Fri Feb 24, 2017 10:04 pm

[Grammar] p. 187

under 'Tyrannical'

The last sentence is "Any dissenting opinion is considered tro be utter betrayal.

The word "tro" should be changed to "to".
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Re: Typos

Post by Majestic » Wed Mar 01, 2017 6:49 pm

[Grammar] p. 195

At the top of the page, in the example, where it says "...the unfortunate Woodman fails his Intelligence (traditions)check..."

the word "traditions" should be capitalized, so that it reads:

At the top of the page, in the example, where it says "...the unfortunate Woodman fails his Intelligence (Traditions)check..."
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Re: Typos

Post by Jon Hodgson » Thu Mar 02, 2017 10:36 am

Thanks for everyone's efforts here! Greatly appreciated!

I think we're done now, so I'll stick a fork in the thread. Thanks again!
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Re: Typos

Post by Majestic » Thu Mar 02, 2017 6:07 pm

If it's possible to sneak one last one through, Jon, here's a teensy-tiny last one:

[Typo] p. 195

In the middle of the table, under 'NEUTREAL ATTITUDE REACTION', the period after "help" should be removed:

The NPC offers no help., but does no harm.

Hopefully these little corrections (all pretty minor, really) will help make a more polished final book for any reprints.
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Re: Typos

Post by Otaku-sempai » Thu Mar 02, 2017 6:45 pm

Majestic wrote:If it's possible to sneak one last one through, Jon, here's a teensy-tiny last one:

[Typo] p. 195

In the middle of the table, under 'NEUTREAL ATTITUDE REACTION', the period after "help" should be removed:

The NPC offers no help., but does no harm.

Hopefully these little corrections (all pretty minor, really) will help make a more polished final book for any reprints.
DId you miss the misspelling of 'NEUTRAL,' Majestic? Or was that just you?

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Re: Typos

Post by Majestic » Tue Mar 07, 2017 11:14 pm

That was me just typing too fast, I'm afraid. :oops:
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